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[Pelbagai] [Takwil Puisi 007] Hujan

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Post time 14-2-2019 01:36 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts |Read mode


Tahniah kepada pemenang [Takwil Puisi 006]The Shores of Love, @bianglala <<< pakai bomoh ke? dan @chesfa *Pemenang dipilih berdasarkan poin penting yang dilampirkan, berkenaan dengan sajak ini.



Jawapan Takwil Puisi The Shores of Love

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Puisi ditulis oleh seorang lelaki yang baru bercinta. Menyatakan impian, keinginan dan harapan dia bersama si gadis yang sebelum ini hanya diminati dari jauh. Penulis tersebut menggunakan lautan dan persekitarannya sebagai perumpamaan. Bagaimana pasiran pantai dipenuhi kerang-kerangan cinta dan memori indah, satu anugerah yang sangat dihargainya. Semua benda kelihatan cantik dan sempurna, angan-angan penulis telah bertukar menjadinyata, hidupnya berseri bagaikan dilimpahi cahaya bintang-bintang yang berkelipan di angkasaraya. Namun begitu, ketiadaan perasaan duka dan keluh kesah dalam hubungan yang masih baharu ini membuat si penulis tertanya-tanya samada kegembiraan ini boleh berkekalan. Walau bagaimanapun, penulis mengakhiri puisinya dengan memberitahu apa yang dia rasai sekarang adalah kegembiraan, perasaan sedih yang pernah dirasainya telah hilang menjauh, impiannya untuk bersama si gadis pujaan telah tercapai dan penulis yakin perasaan dan mimpi indah itu akan berkekalan.

Puisi untuk minggu ini,



Hujan Rintik rintik semakin lama semakin laju
Dentam dentum segala isi alam
Kupeluk tubuhku hangat
Ya Allah lindungi semua yg ada disana
Aku senyum, hujan semestinya penyeri alam walau garang
Dan aku masih menunggu walau semakin gelap dan hujan telah turun laju


karya oleh





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 Author| Post time 14-2-2019 01:38 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
tahniah

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thanks KILL  Post time 14-2-2019 03:39 PM
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@Beautifulliar.

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Post time 14-2-2019 01:47 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
KILL_NANCY replied at 14-2-2019 01:41 PM
@Beautifulliar.

@chicozinn

t.k tag, byk dah terlepas ni. Ada masa saya cuba
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Post time 14-2-2019 01:48 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
tahniah kak dila puisi terpilih
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 Author| Post time 14-2-2019 01:58 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Catpaw replied at 14-2-2019 01:47 PM
t.k tag, byk dah terlepas ni. Ada masa saya cuba

anytime ma fren.anytime.
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Post time 14-2-2019 02:11 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
KILL_NANCY replied at 14-2-2019 05:39 AM
@adila39 hadirrrr

mekasihhh kill...

hmmm macam x layak je... sbb pendek sgt ni.. and ditulis 5minit je...

but i am so flattered.. tqvm brother!

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Post time 14-2-2019 02:11 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
MeghanK replied at 14-2-2019 05:48 AM
tahniah kak dila puisi terpilih

mekasihhh... hehehe maluuuuu

sbb x hebat pun puisi tuu
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Post time 14-2-2019 02:13 PM | Show all posts
hi uols
cane nak main ni
tak reti la
iols 1st time nak join
mohon tunjuk ajar ye kawan2 semua
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Post time 14-2-2019 02:13 PM | Show all posts
heyyy bestnye

nk post puisi tu kt mana uols
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Post time 14-2-2019 02:17 PM | Show all posts
wow menarik! kena takwil puisi hujan this week?
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Post time 14-2-2019 02:21 PM | Show all posts
mohon @adila39 buat puisi 'panas' plk lepas ni

sbb skrg cuaca panas shangat
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Post time 14-2-2019 02:22 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
sapeka replied at 14-2-2019 02:13 PM
hi uols
cane nak main ni
tak reti la

kena tafsirkan maksud puisi di atas..nanti momod bagi markah
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Post time 14-2-2019 02:22 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
KILL_NANCY replied at 14-2-2019 05:38 AM
tahniah

@chesfa

tahniah @chesfa
@bianglala


dah la pandai masak pandai serba serbii!

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TQ sis adila. :)  Post time 14-2-2019 03:41 PM
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Post time 14-2-2019 02:32 PM | Show all posts
MeghanK replied at 14-2-2019 02:22 PM
kena tafsirkan maksud puisi di atas..nanti momod bagi markah

ok faham, thanks chuolls. kena fikir malam malam tenang
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intan_smsb replied at 14-2-2019 02:13 PM
heyyy bestnye

nk post puisi tu kt mana uols

pm puisi awak kat saya intan bersama pengertiannya sekali.terima kasih.
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adila39 replied at 14-2-2019 02:11 PM
mekasihhh kill...

hmmm macam x layak je... sbb pendek sgt ni.. and ditulis 5minit je...

ok2 no problem.
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