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myasha

i thought i saw a ***** cat

eqeqqeqeqeqqe bleh tak cam nie.....

Greenbottle3

I must be halucinating. Must be the stale chapatti i ate this morning. Or those bloody kas kas in the curry  getting my head screwed. The ***** cat! It's turning into a king kong!!

nenekglamer

Bewildered, I rushed to the door, skipping over the defeated man that I had knocked off earlier.  I could see the rusty door but it seemed too far.  I ran and ran towards it, still the distance wasn't changing.  

The kingkong boomed with laughter.  He was still standing at the same spot.

I was intrigued to look down at my running feet and to my dismay, I was actually running on a threadmill.  No wonder!  Argh silly me.  I jumped off and ran towards the door.  In a hurry I grabbed the door knob and tried to turn it as hard as I could.

"No!"  I screamed in anger.  As the knob broke from the door.

I guess, I did it too hard and the poor rusty thing fell off.  I hissed under my breath.  I felt like I was the most pathetic person in the world.  I hated my bad omen.  The king kong still laughed at me sarcastically.  It was so damn annoying to see him roll on the floor and still laughing at me as if I was doing it on purpose like some kind of a stand up comedy act.

I didnt know how it happened, but suddenly rage surged through me.  My heart beat as fast as it ever could.  My eyes felt fiery.  I could hear me breathing loud like an angry bull.  I could almost see steam coming out of my nose.

I was fuming mad at the king kong thing. To hell with his size.  I caught a glimpe at a baseball bat leaning against the wall near the door.  I grabbed it and made for the still rolling king kong.

"You stupid piece of ****!"  I yelled and with the bat I hit him hard on his head.  He stopped his frolics and was immediately silenced.  Blood started to ooze out from the left side of his hairy forehead, the place that received my angry hit.  

Even though I was naturally a meek person and was basically afraid of aggression and blood, this time, I was feeling so damn good.  I screeched like a witch.   I smiled.

Then... I saw something on him...  Something so familiar.  I'd seen it before.  I knelt down before his still body studying his hairy muscular figure.

"What's this?"  I held it between my fingers.

[ Last edited by nenekglamer at 27-1-2006 10:21 PM ]

seribulan

A scroll of formula. Formula that's important for all mankind.

raeshad

A well-kept formula, hidden from mankind so as not to tempt them to brew it. To harness it's power, which can bring death and destruction to every living being in the already ratched world, albeit important for them.

The death of the big hairy ape I has just killed signifies the death of the last of The King of Kongs, the secret guardians of the scroll, but I didnt know that. So, I did the most sensible thing that any human being would do - study it.


ps. sori..edit pronoun...

[ Last edited by seribulan at 29-1-2006 11:36 PM ]

seribulan

A month later, I was in the lab. Alone.

*This is not a part of the story*
I really don't know whats in your minds or how this story is going to end.. I'm lost...completely lost..lol

seribulan

Originally posted by camm at 29-1-2006 03:32 PM
*This is not a part of the story*
I really don't know whats in your minds or how this story is going to end.. I'm lost...completely lost..lol

ff:actually, u just think up the next line...let others worry what goes after it...dats the secret...
dun worry urself to death of the outcome of the story...just complement the last line...remember
when u do a puzzle? u don't know what u will get in the end...so just enjoy it...:cak:

raeshad

"The formula that I've been working on should be ready by now. I only need to test it" I thought loudly. "Now where is that b***dy cat..."

"Amadeus, where are you....Amadeus........hah....i found you.....there you are......"

The exact moment when I tried to pat my cat, I felt an invisible hand groping me from behind, trying to wrestle me down. I yelled at the top of my lungs. In that short instant, the safety of the formula was the only thing that my mind can process, only to notice that IT WAS NO LONGER IN MY GRASP .

"NOOOOOOOO"

The formula was about to shatter when......

[ Last edited by seribulan at 29-1-2006 11:37 PM ]

seribulan

something unthinkable was happening...i (not she la...the pronoun...stick to that) felt myself changing...
Oh no!

raeshad

*kes kes kes...sorry seri....thanks for the edit....*

seribulan

*FULL STORY*

The night was young. I picked up my book and continued to read when I heard...
my brilliant idea of hitting the man with the book vanished before my eyes.. my sister!
oh no! i just can't.. can't let her get close.. and just as i feared, i heard her little
footsteps getting nearer and nearer...
He cupped my mouth so hard and I bite. But he didn't budge. I was screaming but not even my little sister could hear my voice.

And at that moment, I know my sister would never find me.  
Blackness swirled. Next time, I opened my eyes, my heart stopped!  
"where am i? this is not my house!"

i looked around me frantically. i was in a room where there were no furniture except for old cardboards strewn everywhere.

i was all alone.  

"You should count your lucky star to still be able to have a chance
to know this is not your abode...ahahahah!" the raspy, bitter laugh
menacingly tickled my ears.  

I screamed. the man was back! i could not see his hideous face for it was covered in a mask.

"scream as loud as you can... no one can hear you here!!!" he laughed like a maniac.  


"Where's your husband? We need him to do a special job for us..."

"...Are you crazy..??? I'm not married yet. You come to a wrong person..Please..let me free.. "

"Don't think you can wiggle yourself out just like that, dearie...He's the
important key in our project. He just can't go ahiding. There will be price
to pay!"

"i'm telling you! you've got the wrong person! i'm not yet married! see.. no ring!" i said as i wriggled my fingers right before his eyes.

The man stared at me.  Quietly...., mysteriously.  "Then who are you?"

'Does it matter who i am? Does it matter if i'm not what you think i am?' the voice in the dark said.
I searched in the dark for the voice, and as I looked towards the place where I tought the voice came from, something strange happened.
parts of the lines from the book i read before i was kidnapped came into my mind..

no.. i scolded myself.. stay focus. i could not believe i could still refer to the situation at hand to some books that i have just read.

"not someone you're looking for, obviously! let me go!" i cried tremblingly...
"it's no easy to let you go just like that"...said the man..
"You have seen my face, you must die!" the man shouted.

My hands were sweating, my knees were shaking.
I am not a part of his plan, why I should die?
Suddenly I felt so angry of what's happening to me. I kept thinking, "I don't deserve this...I don't deserve this... "  
I couldn't help but saying it out loud and screamed at the top of my voice, "Damn it, I'm not even a part of the plan, your stupid f***ing plan, why should I die!?? Leave me alone!! I don't have a husband and I don't know what you're looking for!!
"how should i know that you're speaking the truth...what if you're lying to me"...said the man again
He drew out the pointy knife.
He winked at me and laughed viciously.

I was determined to escape, but I couldn't think.
My mind goes blank..I could't think of anything at this moment...Oh God..please help me...
He slowly came to me with his knife.
"Say your last wish now.." he said.

We struggled. He was bigger, but I managed to grabbed the knife. With both of my hands, I shakily aimed the knife to his heart.
He was shocked that I can beat him just like David beating Goliath.

"Now! Tell me what the hell is this all about...what was my dear 'hubby'
supposed to help you with? Spit it out!"

"well, well, well.. what have we got here?"

i fely my blood recoiled as i heard another man's voice from behind my back..
I turned around and saw a tall figure clad in a black cloak.  His face was half covered with a cowboy hat.  His cloak swayed around. I couldnt quite see his face.  But his voice sounded so familiar.  As if I'd heard in in my dreams.  Or was it a dream.

The figure slowly approached me.  For one second I it escaped my mind that I was in the middle of a struggle with a man who kidnapped me.  But I managed to knock him unconscious by just one blow across his face with the back of the knife handle which I'd snatched from him earlier.  Then I left him on the floor, face down.

I stood motionless.  Trying to figure out the owner of that familiar voice belonging to the dark tall figure whom was already standing in front of me.  Close enough that I could hear his breaths.  If only his face were visible...  

The tall dark figure suddenly laughed.  Harder and louder by the second.
The dark figure came closer and closer, looked at me and smirked.
I saw his face. It was ugly, with a deep scar on his left cheek. His teeth were crooked.

"My darling, can't you remember me?"

He said in those familiar voice.
i thought i saw a ***** cat
  I must be halucinating. Must be the stale chapatti i ate this morning. Or those bloody kas kas in the curry  getting my head screwed. The ***** cat! It's turning into a king kong!!

Bewildered, I rushed to the door, skipping over the defeated man that I had knocked off earlier.  I could see the rusty door but it seemed too far.  I ran and ran towards it, still the distance wasn't changing.  

The kingkong boomed with laughter.  He was still standing at the same spot.

I was intrigued to look down at my running feet and to my dismay, I was actually running on a threadmill.  No wonder!  Argh silly me.  I jumped off and ran towards the door.  In a hurry I grabbed the door knob and tried to turn it as hard as I could.

"No!"  I screamed in anger.  As the knob broke from the door.

I guess, I did it too hard and the poor rusty thing fell off.  I hissed under my breath.  I felt like I was the most pathetic person in the world.  I hated my bad omen.  The king kong still laughed at me sarcastically.  It was so damn annoying to see him roll on the floor and still laughing at me as if I was doing it on purpose like some kind of a stand up comedy act.

I didnt know how it happened, but suddenly rage surged through me.  My heart beat as fast as it ever could.  My eyes felt fiery.  I could hear me breathing loud like an angry bull.  I could almost see steam coming out of my nose.

I was fuming mad at the king kong thing. To hell with his size.  I caught a glimpe at a baseball bat leaning against the wall near the door.  I grabbed it and made for the still rolling king kong.

"You stupid piece of ****!"  I yelled and with the bat I hit him hard on his head.  He stopped his frolics and was immediately silenced.  Blood started to ooze out from the left side of his hairy forehead, the place that received my angry hit.  

Even though I was naturally a meek person and was basically afraid of aggression and blood, this time, I was feeling so damn good.  I screeched like a witch.   I smiled.

Then... I saw something on him...  Something so familiar.  I'd seen it before.  I knelt down before his still body studying his hairy muscular figure.

"What's this?"  I held it between my fingers.

A scroll of formula. Formula that's important for all mankind.  

A well-kept formula, hidden from mankind so as not to tempt them to brew it. To harness it's power, which can bring death and destruction to every living being in the already ratched world, albeit important for them.

The death of the big hairy ape I has just killed signifies the death of the last of The King of Kongs, the secret guardians of the scroll, but I didnt know that. So, I did the most sensible thing that any human being would do - study it.
A month later, I was in the lab. Alone.  
"The formula that I've been working on should be ready by now. I only need to test it" I thought loudly. "Now where is that b***dy cat..."

"Amadeus, where are you....Amadeus........hah....i found you.....there you are......"

The exact moment when I tried to pat my cat, I felt an invisible hand groping me from behind, trying to wrestle me down. I yelled at the top of my lungs. In that short instant, the safety of the formula was the only thing that my mind can process, only to notice that IT WAS NO LONGER IN MY GRASP .

"NOOOOOOOO"

The formula was about to shatter when......something unthinkable was happening...i felt myself changing...
Oh no!

seribulan

What the...!I got up from the floor where I was trashing about...didn't realized
I was having a nightmare, a month after my abduction.

limau_nipis

The secret formula was still there beside me, the small potion seemed to wink at me. And I was tempted by it, the green shimmery colour of the potion. Slowly, my hands seemed out of control.

I feel my hand lifted the potion, staring at it.
The potion was priceless, but I know now what I should do.

I drank the potion, it was tasteless.
I could feel something was happening inside me... something was about to change.
Something was emerging inside me.

I feel the pain, I was screaming.. louder and louder..
My stomach hurts, I peeked at my stomach.

My stomach grew bigger and bigger. In a blink of an eye, I looked like I am 9-month pregnant..

*not part of the story*  Pardon me friends if I'm interfering again.... I want to add to this story but I'm a bit confuse here...is the formula comes in the form of a liquid or is it just a scroll of paper? I feel that there's been some misunderstanding here...or maybe it's just me who don't understand.*

If I'm wrong, carry on with the story please

limau_nipis

Originally posted by camm at 3/2/06 01:23 AM
*not part of the story*  Pardon me friends if I'm interfering again.... I want to add to this story but I'm a bit confuse here...is the formula comes in the form of a liquid or is it just a scroll  ...

ff:
camm.. mula mula jumpe a scroll, then someone changed it to potion.. so i just carry on..
agaknya scroll to magically transformed to potion.. heheh

seribulan

There's something moving inside my stomach. Oh God! What could it be?
The portion that I brew specifically according to the formula was working?

seribulan

my bff gave me a packet of her collagen cappucino...

skinskin

in my mind.. did she think im not pretty inside out?..hey..pretty is subjective okey..

seribulan

A potion to reveal your inner beauty? Is it an innovative?