[HORA] BROKEN VOW - LIVE VERSION (RECORDED ON 02ND. JUNE 2009)

sham159

Sham minta maaf dan beritahu awal2 yerk...part after chorus tu FLAT..bila sham dengar balik phrase 'you raise me up' tu flat...banyak selepas chorus suara agak serak...so sorry...

Leybra

huhuhu.. another person yang pernah salah gunakan kemudahan pc selepas leybra..

sat ek.. nak dengar lagu you raise me up

sham159

Apa nak buat....

kat umah xder PC.......sham baru recorded seribu tahun tanpa muzik...

Dengar jugak yerk!

Originally posted by Leybra at 4-6-2008 08:53 PM
huhuhu.. another person yang pernah salah gunakan kemudahan pc selepas leybra..

sat ek.. nak dengar lagu you raise me up

alyana

OMGGGGG!!!


firstly maafkan i ek , kali ni i nak kritik citit. bukan i berlagak bagus atau ape, just kritik maka dgn kritik itu kita akan getting better. again kalau tak boleh diguna pakai, so buanglah. and maybe kot2 sikomeng atau si bakat or forumer lain boleh bagi tunjuk ajar jua ke i.


Here we goes

To me, your rendition for U raise Me up, worse! ur worse ever singing tat ur have recorded. And wayyy behind than 2 org yg pernah perform lagu U raise me Up, u make me even appreciate that person more and more.

It was sounded horrendous, pitching larik pada tahap tak boleh diterima sampai ke segi tiga bermuda..., ur tone betul2 jadi mcm tone angsa, I'm sorry, sbb it was overly, really, overly nasal until can't be considered as vocally acceptable. I think even musicaally pun not acceptable.

Yes we can be nasal a bit, , but not to the extend sampai mcm tu. Eveything in this singing was a disaster, and can be considered as Cutton Buds Singing   . After i listen , I'm giggle sampai I , tak boleh nak cakap apa. I believe, not the listener that will cry, but the lagu yg menangis sbb dikerjakan sebgitu rupa.

I believe if versi u yg nyanyi kat studio tu jumpa u yg ini, haruslah dia berleter kat u 7 hari 7 mlm. Non Stop!.  I'm sorry to say this, but that purely from my heart. Honestly. Forumer lain pun pernah kena jua. Mcm Oja, Shuffeak, IZ, Leybra, Stone dan lain2.


Your seribu impian,  this song is not for you. Your tone totally not fit dgn that song. Yes you can, but the lenggok that you presented need major overhaul. kena brush up pakai berus dawai.... air pulak pakai klorox. Need a lot of workkk!.

I dah tak sanggup dgr your 3rd singin tu.



apa2pun, ni pandangan i je, yg secebis debu. dun listen to me.
Mana Sham yg we all kenal yg nyanyii 3 lagu yg hebat sebelum ini

jac_diehard_fan

sham tamo masuk CI2 ke

sham159

Hi Alyana,

Tima kacih kerana memberikan pandangan yek.
Komen komen ni lah yang boleh improve kan suara sham.

Sham ada bagi gak pada pada DR Dean...banyak gak dia kritik..ini lak kritikan dia :


First thing I noticed is that your diction is much improved. However you are
squeezing the dipthong 'ou' as you sing the word 'mountain' and in several
other words, sounding the words as if you were a southern US Country singer,
which is okay if you're singing a Country song. This song is not one of
those. You might try singing the dipthong as 'ow' as in the word 'owl'
without the 'L'; i.e., 'mowtin'.

You also dip the pitch on some words like strong. This song is meant to be
sung straight, not in a pop style.

You're correct when you say you're flatting some higher notes particularly
on the word 'up'. Don't sing the 'u' sound. Sing the word 'up' as 'ahp' as
this will yield a true 'up' sound to the listener but will allow you to stay
on pitch. Don't be concerned to how it sounds to you. Record and listen to
it.

You are improving well. Keep it ahp.

Dr Dean
===========================
"A beautiful voice is a glorious gift of our
gracious Creator, and it would show little
gratitude were we not to attempt to use it
the best possible way." (Johann A Hiller)

Originally posted by alyana at 5-6-2008 01:54 AM
OMGGGGG!!!


firstly maafkan i ek , kali ni i nak kritik citit. bukan i berlagak bagus atau ape, just kritik maka dgn kritik itu kita akan getting better. again kalau tak boleh diguna pakai,  ...

mee_maggie

maap bertanya, dr dean tu sapa

sham159

Dr Dean..seorang guru vokal di Amerika..berpengalaman hampir 60 tahun dalam pengajaran vokal. Dioa

Originally posted by mee_maggie at 5-6-2008 10:03 AM
maap bertanya, dr dean tu sapa

sham159

Sham dah rakam semula lagu you raise me up..

Comments yerk~

mee_maggie

wow , kagum la ngan sham. Bersungguh sungguh nak baikki mutu nyanyian. Sampai minta pendapat guru vocal america.

sham159

Tima kacih ye mee maggie ..alaa..teringat mee maggie..teringin lak nak makan maggie...sham tak makan tengahri lagi ni...dah pukul 5 petang ni..malas nak ke kedai.

Macam ni la cara sham belaja vokal..tanya pada org2 yg pakar...sebenarnya banyak lagi yg tanya dan rujuk...mat salleh ni bagus kritikannya..menbina dan terkehadapan...mereka kalau tak sedap mereka akan kata tak sedap...kalau bagus mereka cakap bagus..kita kena belajar cara mereka...terutama dalam berfikir..


Komen lah lagu yg dirakam semula tu

Originally posted by mee_maggie at 6-6-2008 04:31 PM
wow , kagum la ngan sham. Bersungguh sungguh nak baikki mutu nyanyian. Sampai minta pendapat guru vocal america.

mee_maggie

komen ?

sebenarnya kan sham , mee langsung x da ilmu dlm bidang nyanyian ni . Cuma bley cakap sedap atau x je . Klo komen utk membantu meningkatkan kualiti nyanyian , mee ta pandai.

mee lepak kat sini pun sebab enjoy dengar nyanyian/experiment bakat2 kat sini.

Ada dengar you raise me up sebelum nie , pada mee lah , versi baru jauh lebey bagus.

klo bley baiki lagi kualiti rakaman tu.Bunyi mic tu mengganggu sket.

Tp x kisahlah memandangkan tujuan utama sham utk memperbaikki nyanyian , bukan rakaman.

Tunggu apa kata diva alyana pula.

sham159

Askum,

Sham nak minta tolong!..sham punya acoustica mixcraft tu dah expired. Sham guna sama macam you all guna..takder pun crack version? penat2 rakam tak leh record..sayang sangat.

Boleh bagi crack version? yang takder expired punya.

Thank you.

seroja

kan oja dah kasi tu ada keygen bagai... sama la tu bang..

sham159

abg sham installed yg Oja bagi....acoustica mixcraft...sekrg tak leh bukak langsung....bila bukak dia muncul stau kotak kecil...suruh abg sham langgan software ni....bila abg sham click 'later' terus hilang website /software tu.
Camana ye?

Originally posted by seroja at 9-6-2008 10:07 PM
kan oja dah kasi tu ada keygen bagai... sama la tu bang..

seroja

caner nak sakap ek. abg kene klik kat crack tuh dulu. letak nama situ. .nanti ada kuar kod. kod tu nanti abg guna tuk bukak AM tu nanti (yg kua kotak kecik tu la).

sham159

DAH TAK BOLEH....abg sham uninstalled software tu...kemudian install balik...muncul kotak kecil..dia kata TIME'S UP!..langsung tak bole buat apa2..semua terpadam..

klik kat crack tu...kat mana? masa bila?

Originally posted by seroja at 9-6-2008 10:50 PM
caner nak sakap ek. abg kene klik kat crack tuh dulu. letak nama situ. .nanti ada kuar kod. kod tu nanti abg guna tuk bukak AM tu nanti (yg kua kotak kecik tu la).

Muntz

My komen utk lagu You Raised Me Up...

1. Mic tu terlalu dekat dgn mulut lah.
2. TOne suara u agak unik... tapi tak lah seunik I atau ahkak Iss. Tapi mmg suara uols boleh bawak pegi jauhlah. Boleh jual kata orang.
3. Aku pernah dengar siapa ntah bawak lagu You Raised Me Up kat sini... rasanya diorang bawak lagi bagus... tapi uols bawak lagu nie dgn cara sendiri. I salute.
4. Diction bagus.. no problem. Ada tergelincir sikit2 macam I jugak.
5. I love your vibrato... tak berlebih sangat macam Urban Iz.. tak jugak kurang sangat macam I. Sedang2 kata orang.

Overall.... good job... but not the level that I can say, "blow-off job!".

sham159

Cubaan menyanyi lagu harapan.....

jac_diehard_fan

blow off job tu ape muntz