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Author: nobito

Cinta Tepi Longkang

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Post time 30-10-2018 12:41 PM | Show all posts
DeLafee replied at 29-10-2018 11:50 PM
Di tepi longkang tu ishhh mencacatkan puisi nobito... Part lain dah bagus dah... Part tepi longkang  ...

kalau tepi perigi?
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Post time 30-10-2018 12:44 PM | Show all posts
baca rangkap pertama dan kedua mek fikir ''oh jumpa anak kucing kot kat tepi longkang terus sayang'' yaa maafkan saya tt..
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Post time 30-10-2018 01:19 PM | Show all posts
noraidil_06 replied at 29-10-2018 05:15 PM
Puisi dia ala2 dark gitu.
Ala2 Chairil Anwar, gittew

Chairil Anwar..? Pengsan!!!!


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Post time 30-10-2018 01:21 PM | Show all posts
noor2 replied at 30-10-2018 12:09 AM
Akak terus terbayang  tt ni seekor kucing. ....

Hahahha so cute... Mcm kucing bila lapar dia akan gosok kepala dekat kaki kita minta makan... Terus, teringat kucing dkt rumah...
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Post time 30-10-2018 01:22 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
DeLafee replied at 30-10-2018 01:19 PM
Chairil Anwar..? Pengsan!!!!

Ala kau ni
Drama kuat tau.
Akk bodek dia je
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Post time 30-10-2018 01:22 PM | Show all posts

Tepian pantai la romantis sikit...
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Post time 30-10-2018 01:24 PM | Show all posts
noraidil_06 replied at 30-10-2018 05:22 AM
Ala kau ni
Drama kuat tau.
Akk bodek dia je

Hehehe.. I hanya menyahut aura nobito yg kuat berdrama... Tp terhibur okay dgn puisi dia tepi longkang ni...
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Post time 30-10-2018 01:28 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
DeLafee replied at 30-10-2018 01:22 PM
Tepian pantai la romantis sikit...

Tepi kolam indah water?

Chuols buka la thread.
Kaka kalau buka sure jiwang meleleh je.
Nak baca something new
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Post time 30-10-2018 01:30 PM | Show all posts
DeLafee replied at 30-10-2018 01:22 PM
Tepian pantai la romantis sikit...

musim tak sesuai sekarang ni
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Post time 30-10-2018 01:37 PM | Show all posts
noraidil_06 replied at 30-10-2018 05:28 AM
Tepi kolam indah water?

Chuols buka la thread.

Aiols x pandai berpuisi cintan cintun... Kalu pandai dah lama buka... Aiols suka baca santai2 jah... Xda ke forummers yg pandai tulis kisah cinta ala2 cerpen or novel...? I suka nk baca... Hehe..

Dik nobito mungkin boleh asah bakat menulis cerpen/novel cinta pula...

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Post time 30-10-2018 01:46 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
DeLafee replied at 30-10-2018 01:37 PM
Aiols x pandai berpuisi cintan cintun... Kalu pandai dah lama buka... Aiols suka baca santai2 jah. ...

Eh ade bod penulisan.
Sana byk karya best
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Post time 30-10-2018 01:48 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
DeLafee replied at 30-10-2018 01:37 PM
Aiols x pandai berpuisi cintan cintun... Kalu pandai dah lama buka... Aiols suka baca santai2 jah. ...

X yah cintan.
Thread meroyan pun ok.
Akk nk buka la jap thread meroyan
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 Author| Post time 30-10-2018 03:27 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
meklalala replied at 30-10-2018 12:44 PM
baca rangkap pertama dan kedua mek fikir ''oh jumpa anak kucing kot kat tepi longkang terus sayang'' ...

Haiyooo...tak pernah bercinta wicet ke????

Budak wicet, cinta online je yg faham puisi ni.
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 Author| Post time 30-10-2018 03:30 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
DeLafee replied at 30-10-2018 01:19 PM
Chairil Anwar..? Pengsan!!!!

Aku tak rasa ko mampu hadam puisi2 Chairil Anwar. Even puisi simple pon ko tak boleh faham sis.
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Post time 30-10-2018 03:33 PM | Show all posts
nobito replied at 30-10-2018 03:27 PM
Haiyooo...tak pernah bercinta wicet ke????

Budak wicet, cinta online je yg faham puisi ni.

tak pernah sis bahasa dak dak wicet tinggi sangat kak susah nak faham..



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Post time 30-10-2018 04:37 PM | Show all posts
nobito replied at 30-10-2018 07:30 AM
Aku tak rasa ko mampu hadam puisi2 Chairil Anwar. Even puisi simple pon ko tak boleh faham sis.





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Post time 30-10-2018 04:42 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Longkang Kering ke penuh sampah?
Ada bau tak?
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 Author| Post time 30-10-2018 06:33 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
meklalala replied at 30-10-2018 03:33 PM
tak pernah sis  bahasa dak dak wicet tinggi sangat kak susah nak faham..

Apa kau cakap ni pon aku tak faham sis...pointless.

Aku bukan cakap pasal bahasa budak wicet tapi cinta budak wicet, fb, twitter, Cari Jodoh online etc...Get my point or not sis?
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 Author| Post time 30-10-2018 06:37 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Edited by nobito at 30-10-2018 06:39 PM
DeLafee replied at 30-10-2018 04:37 PM


Tak payah nak propa lah ko baca puisi Chairil Anwar.

Ramai je perempuan macam ko ni benda tak tahu cakap tahu.

Bagi satu Puisi Chairil Anwar yg ko pernah baca...jangan sekadar tahu taip nama "Chairil Anwar". Padahal kau clueless siapa dia kann...then no need ti show off macam tahu sedangkan ko hanya tahu taip nama dia sahaja.
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 Author| Post time 30-10-2018 06:41 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
VespaSilbe replied at 30-10-2018 04:42 PM
Longkang Kering ke penuh sampah?
Ada bau tak?

Longkang Daerah Sabak Bernam always bersih cantik.

Longkang Lembah Klang yg busuk tu.
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