analysing poems

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Deep in the dark you'll surrender your heart
    But you know, but you know
    That you can't fight the moonlight, no
    You can't fight it
    It's gonna get to your heart

salah..rhyno..nih kisah seseorg cuba melawan perasaan
sendiri..walaupon tahu dia akan tertewas jugak...

oo..mentang2 ko tak de signature...

badaksumbu

Originally posted by seribulan at 18-10-2003 10:54:
Deep in the dark you'll surrender your heart
    But you know, but you know
    That you can't fight the moonlight, no
    You can't fight it
    It's gonna get to your heart

salah..rhyno..n ...

clap clap clap........

atas sebab2 tertentu I will give this a pass...personal reason.. but I think most of U have decipher well...gd..gd...continue ur posting...each post here earn credit based on meritocracy heh..typically sporean

kirei_wa

errrrr..tumpang tanya............

ade saper2 nampak budak dongeng rakyat tak....

lama laa tak nampak....menyombong ke apa....

ur in the wrong room, dear lady...

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Originally posted by seribulan at 18/10/03 10:54 AM:
Deep in the dark you'll surrender your heart
    But you know, but you know
    That you can't fight the moonlight, no
    You can't fight it
    It's gonna get to your heart

salah..rhyno..n ...

bulan tak dapat pon:cry::cry::cry:

sorry I overlooked

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Originally posted by badaksumbu at 18-10-2003 10:40:
2. yg ni.....

dia nak bagitau prinsip dia yg dia tak mudah terpengaruh dgn org, lain, biar org lain nak kata apa pun, n satu lagi dia taknak jadi hipokrit..... janji rock......

mementang ler ko takder signature......
haper pon... timo kasey ler utk ko....... ermmmm..... :re:

bhai..analisis poem spontan aku..

berkeruyuk lusuh..
berputar putar ia sendiri,
dengan berbekalkan serbuk putih nan mewangi.
serta cairan suci..
punat ditekan..
bergerak ia..ke hulu ke hilir ..ke atas ke bawah..
kemudian sampai satu ketika...ia kehilangan air,,
yang disedut keluar..
kemudian sekali lagi ia berputar..
di dalam tempatnya....
untuk memastikan..
ianya cukup bebas...
daripada kebasahan..

terperusuk ia di dalam,
sehinggalah di angkat..
dan di tempatkan..
ditempat terik dan berangin...

eligible_gurl

berkeruyuk lusuh..---keadaan baju2 abg rodri haprak tak berbasuh

berputar putar ia sendiri,--mesin basuh automatic

dengan berbekalkan serbuk putih nan mewangi.--sabun pencuci

serta cairan suci..--air mineral (yg tak tercemar dgn tikus2 berenang)

punat ditekan..--start mesin basuh

bergerak ia..ke hulu ke hilir ..ke atas ke bawah..--situasi mesin basuh semasa sibuk berfungsi

kemudian sampai satu ketika...ia kehilangan air,,
yang disedut keluar..---air die dah keluar ke drain

kemudian sekali lagi ia berputar..
di dalam tempatnya....
untuk memastikan..
ianya cukup bebas...
daripada kebasahan..-----dlm erti kata lain baju abg rodri tadi sdg di SPIN mcm spinning gasing

terperusuk ia di dalam,---sbb abg rodri suke bertangguh (asyk ngan porem) maka baju tadi telah di perap dlm kesin basuh tadi

sehinggalah di angkat..--setelah tersedar dr malas abg rodri gi amik kain2 tu

dan di tempatkan..--aksi menyidai kain

ditempat terik dan berangin...----kat ampaian yg mengadap matahari terbit

kesimpulan cite psl abg rodri basuh kain baju kotor ngan mesin basuh automatik buatan Japan.. adeeeeehh ini pun buleh buat poem
sekian..

wey jgn kasi aku poem melayu ahh tuk analyse..mana aku tau sngt..

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Song

O lady, when the tipped cup of the moon blessed you
You became soft fire with a cloud's grace;
The difficult stars swam for eyes in your face;
You stood, and your shadow was my place:
You turned, your shadow turned to ice
    O my lady.  

O lady, when the sea caressed you
You were a marble of foam, but dumb.
When will the stone open its tomb?
When will the waves give over their foam?
You will not die, nor come home,
    O my lady.

  

O lady, when the wind kissed you
You made him music for you were a shaped shell.
I follow the waters and the wind still
Since my heart heard it and all to pieces fell
Which your lovers stole, meaning ill,
    O my lady.

  

O lady, consider when I shall have lost you
The moon's full hands, scattering waste,
The sea's hands, dark from the world's breast,
The world's decay where the wind's hands have passed,
And my head, worn out with love, at rest
In my hands, and my hands full of dust,
    O my lady.

eli dah huraikan...bravooooo!!!! ingat abis puitis dah tadi takut orang tak paham....

bhai..bahasa mudah je tu.hehe

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mudah...dia tak reti...tapi susah je dia tahu...
tgk kalo dia boleh yg bulan kasik tuh...
kacang je bagik dia..hehheheheeh...kan bos?

mak aii...berjela2 ko kasi aku bhul...klau ye pun kasi la sesudu dulu...susah nak telan bnyk2...nanti tercekik...

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go stanza by satanza la
bos...go go go ale ale ale...

erm.ok ok....aku cuba...tapi mata dah ngantuk ekekekekek....klau tk malam ni besok gelenti aku post

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tido lah dulu...sok pon boleh..
kena bawak mimpi dulu..kot2
dpt alamat nanti....gud nite...

ok bhul besok aku post jawapan aku k...malam...