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Post time 8-1-2004 06:35 PM | Show all posts
It's the heart afraid of breaking
that never learns to dance
It's the dream afraid of waking
that never takes a chance

and the soul afraid of dying
that never learns to live

The Rose (Song by Bette Middler)
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Post time 8-1-2004 06:35 PM | Show all posts
It's the heart afraid of breaking
that never learns to dance
It's the dream afraid of waking
that never takes a chance

and the soul afraid of dying
that never learns to live

The Rose (Song by Bette Middler)
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Post time 9-1-2004 08:56 AM | Show all posts
apsal sampai 2 postings...ni mesti kes server buat hal...
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Post time 9-1-2004 11:34 AM | Show all posts
kang ada yg nyampah
kata sesajer nak tambah
kredits..hheheheh....
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 Author| Post time 9-1-2004 09:50 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by badaksumbu at 7-1-2004 09:16:
mine on this one pulak...

Hark! Does thee hear gusts of wind pangs across the pane?
Or maybe thy not...
Sound of my shattered heart suffice to deafen universe, is the proof of my pain,
But ma ...



almost close la..thankx
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 Author| Post time 9-1-2004 09:51 PM | Show all posts
wuahhhhh.aku ngah sedih ni...nampaknya ada idea buat poem...aku ni klau sedih, depressed giler mula la creative juice flowing....tingat aku pada moka...mana dia eh?
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Post time 10-1-2004 01:04 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by BHAI-SUCI at 9-1-2004 21:51:
wuahhhhh.aku ngah sedih ni...nampaknya ada idea buat poem...aku ni klau sedih, depressed giler mula la creative juice flowing....tingat aku pada moka...mana dia eh?


good time maa :bg:
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Post time 10-1-2004 04:58 PM | Show all posts
It's the heart afraid of breaking
that never learns to dance
It's the dream afraid of waking
that never takes a chance

and the soul afraid of dying
that never learns to live

never afraid to give something/one a chance...you'll never know what you might get/is waiting for you...am i right?

all about eve~nanti la...
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Post time 10-1-2004 07:26 PM | Show all posts
correct badaksumbu...in life
you have to take a chance....
CARPE DIEM...seize the moment...
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Post time 12-1-2004 01:55 PM | Show all posts
mine...

You Can't Say~ by Qi Yu~Alll About Eve

You can say all things must end
You can smile and even pretend
And you can turn and walk away so easily
But you can't say you don't love me any more
You can dream of what might have been
You can cry for what won't pass again
And you can say there is every reason you should leave
But you can't say you don't love me anymore
You can say I'm right you are wrong
You can make your plans to find somebody else
But I can't believe you can carry on
We know what should be said
But you can't find the words instead you say
All things must endYou can smile and even pretend
And you can turn and say you are leaving me for good
But you can't say you don't love me anymore
You can dream of what might have been
You can smile and even pretend
And you can turn and say you are leaving me for good
but you can't say you don't love me
First just say "you don't love me anymore"

mcm citer all about eve la...the woman knows deep down that she loves the man, unfortunately for her there is more important thing than love, in order to leave him she pretend/tell the man that she doesn't love him anymore...but she can't fool him...

last2 yg lelaki tu mati baru menyesal...sedih part ni...:cry::cry:
(yg ni tambahan je )

insert midi sikit...

[mid]http://www.thai.net/jk01/midi/youcan'tsay.mid[/mid]

[ Last edited by badaksumbu on 12-1-2004 at 03:12 PM ]
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Post time 12-1-2004 02:05 PM | Show all posts
"Life in a Love"

Escape me?
Never--
Beloved!
While I am I, and you are you,
So long as the world contains us both,
Me the loving and you the loth,
While the one eludes, must the other pursue.
My life is a fault at least, I fear:
It seems too much like a fate, indeed!
Though I do my best I shall scarce succeed.
But what if I fail of my purpose here?
It is but to keep the nerves at strain,
To dry one's eyes and laugh at a fall,
And, baffled, get up and begin again,--
So the chace takes up one's life, that's all.
While, look but once from your farthest bound
At me so deep in the dust and dark,
No sooner the old hope goes to ground
Than a new one, straight to the self-same mark,
I shape me--
Ever
Removed!

-- Robert Browning
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Post time 12-1-2004 03:37 PM | Show all posts
nanti yek...
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Post time 12-1-2004 10:57 PM | Show all posts
Escape me?
Never--
Beloved!
While I am I, and you are you,
So long as the world contains us both,
                     the poet抯 love is not returned

Me the loving and you the loath,
While the one eludes, must the other pursue.
My life is a fault at least, I fear:
It seems too much like a fate, indeed!
                                 the poet loves the lady but the lady dislikes him

Though I do my best I shall scarce succeed.
But what if I fail of my purpose here?
It is but to keep the nerves at strain,
To dry one's eyes and laugh at a fall,
And, baffled, get up and begin again,--
                         the poet won抰 give up and will pursue the love

So the chance takes up one's life, that's all.
While, look but once from your farthest bound
At me so deep in the dust and dark,
No sooner the old hope goes to ground
Than a new one, straight to the self-same mark,
I shape me--
Ever
Removed!
                                     the poet will forever be hopeful to gain his love
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Post time 15-1-2004 02:06 PM | Show all posts
i wish i could have it my way  
n tell my side of story
but what can i say
it's been long since i've lost the dictionary...
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Post time 15-1-2004 02:29 PM | Show all posts
so what u lost ur dictionary...
u still have ur mental dictionary...
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Post time 15-1-2004 08:52 PM | Show all posts
a light one...heheheh...

A girl must be like a blossom
With honey for just one man.
A man must be like honey bee
And gather all he can.
To fly from blossom to blossom
A honey bee must be free,
But blossom must not ever fly
From bee to bee to bee....
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Post time 16-1-2004 01:12 PM | Show all posts
i'll try to give mine tonight...saper2 yg rajin tu analyse la dulu yek...

[ Last edited by badaksumbu on 16-1-2004 at 01:13 PM ]
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Post time 19-1-2004 12:51 AM | Show all posts
"Life in a Love"

Escape me?
Never--
Beloved!
While I am I, and you are you,
So long as the world contains us both,
Me the loving and you the loth,
While the one eludes, must the other pursue.
My life is a fault at least, I fear:
It seems too much like a fate, indeed!
Though I do my best I shall scarce succeed.
But what if I fail of my purpose here?
It is but to keep the nerves at strain,
To dry one's eyes and laugh at a fall,
And, baffled, get up and begin again,--
So the chace takes up one's life, that's all.
While, look but once from your farthest bound
At me so deep in the dust and dark,
No sooner the old hope goes to ground
Than a new one, straight to the self-same mark,
I shape me--
Ever
Removed!

-- Robert Browning

this is mine...

whatever happen/come what may n though the man knows that the girl he loves doesn't love him, he won't/will never let her go...
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Post time 19-1-2004 01:01 AM | Show all posts
a light one...heheheh...

A girl must be like a blossom
With honey for just one man.
A man must be like honey bee
And gather all he can.
To fly from blossom to blossom
A honey bee must be free,
But blossom must not ever fly
From bee to bee to bee....

mine...

pompuan ni mcm bunga la...kena hias diri cantik2 n tunggu lelaki dtg cari dia, tak boleh dia yg pergi cari lelaki,  lelaki pulak akan pilih antara pompuan2 ni yg mana dia suka, lagi banyak pilihan lagi bagus...dgn kata lain, lelaki boleh berkawan dgn ramai pompuan, tapi pompuan tak boleh buat benda yg sama.....
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Post time 19-1-2004 08:38 PM | Show all posts
penat arr...korang lak
kasik...hem...
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