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Reply #21 karlreef's post
weih karl.. apo ni.. wakakaka...
dia kene ade turutan 5, 7, 5 suku kata..
kn ade 3 baris kn..
so- baris pertama 5 suku kata.. baris kedua 7 suku kata, baris ketiga 5 suku kata balik..
xcaye cuba ko kira yg kitorg dh wat, hehehe..
gud luck!! mmg mencabar minda weihhhh... =)
[ Last edited by aGuiLeHa at 6-5-2006 09:03 AM ] |
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Originally posted by karlreef at 6-5-2006 07:51 AM
fikiranku jauh melayang
hatiku tak tenteram
mengenang kisah silam
erkk..macam tak kene je...
cth ko punye aku ubah sket..
jauh melayang..
mengenang kisah silam..
aku dan dia..
ok dak? |
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lama ku renung
potret dalam genggaman
senyum terukir..
ingin ku ulang
kenangan bersama mu
seperti dulu..
apakan daya
takdir jadi penentu
berpisah jua..
di sini aku
menitis air mata
mengenang dirimu..
ku sisip doa
tulus mengiringimu
menemuiNya.. |
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karlreef yang macho
bila mahu belanje?
aku tuntut tau!!
masak laa kari
bukan ke dikau expert
aku ngap aje...
wakakakakaka!!! =p |
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best aaa haikuuuuuuuuu... aku dh addicted!!! tolong.. tolonggggg.. =p |
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awan kelabu
mengundang rasa hiba
sebak terasa.. |
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apsl kalu aku wat haiku musti cite sedih2??? huhuhu..
nk try wat yg ceria2 plak, go LeHa go!!! =) |
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terik mentari
berarak lembut mega
bayu menyapa.. |
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siapa itu?
renunganmu menggoda
nk kenal buleh?
hahahaha... =p |
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tika dan waktu
seiring usia ku
daku memburu..
mencari erti
siapa sebenarnya
biskan hati..
sekian lama
akhirnya ku temui
mengenal diri... |
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best giler la haiku2 ko leha!!!
pandai betul eh ko carik perkataan BM yg sesuai...BM aku hancus skit la...BI blehla...BM nak kena pikir betui2...tahniah leha dear!!! ko mendpt 1000 markah utk haiku haiku ko!!!! wakakkakakakakka..... |
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aku di bilik
keseorangan, benci
bosan menunggu
amcam haiku aku leha?? |
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First autumn morning
the mirror I stare into
shows my lover's face. |
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Originally posted by IrvingLorenzo at 6-5-2006 06:57 PM
best giler la haiku2 ko leha!!!
pandai betul eh ko carik perkataan BM yg sesuai...BM aku hancus skit la...BI blehla...BM nak kena pikir betui2...tahniah leha dear!!! ko mendpt 1000 markah utk haik ...
wowowowoww, byk giler aa cikgu.. melampau btol, hahhaha!! =p
ala xkesah aa, ko wat dlm bi.. bi aku agak2 hancus jugak, wakakaka.. malu2 |
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Originally posted by IrvingLorenzo at 6-5-2006 06:59 PM
aku di bilik
keseorangan, benci
bosan menunggu
amcam haiku aku leha??
best2, ko tunggu sapa irving?? =p |
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Reply #34 cassiopeia's post
waaa, best2!!
welcome to the club!! =)
tulis aa lagi, hihihi.. |
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Reply #38 karlreef's post
waakaaka best2.. =)
ko nk cekik aku apsl karl? alaaa, majuk aa cmni.. hhuhuhu xkuasa makcik!! =p |
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Reply #34 cassiopeia's post
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cassio, thats a nice one. AND a real haiku....tu mmg idea u ke?? u actually included a seasonal indicator/element that is autumn..NICE ONE! keep making more... |
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Reply #36 aGuiLeHa's post
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saja merepek leha...ini fiksyen tau, bukan betul...ekekkeke....susah wei nak tulis in BM... |
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Reply #38 karlreef's post
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ganaz nie ganaz...haiku nak bunuh org....wakkaakakkka... |
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Category: Belia & Informasi
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Post time 6-5-2006 08:15 AM
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