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 Author| Post time 14-5-2008 10:44 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by intan_mahsuri at 14-5-2008 10:12 AM

aikkk....!!
in....
abgmat masuk sini lagikkkk...
windu lah tuhhh....


abg mat selalu rindu sama In dan IM......
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Post time 14-5-2008 10:52 AM | Show all posts
page dimana ko..
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Post time 14-5-2008 10:56 AM | Show all posts

Balas #1201 indah1285\ catat

takde rindu pun...








actually puisi tu panjang ...tapi abg mat tak dapat ingat semua apa yg ditulis dulu...dah berpindah randah..lupa pula catatan tu letak kat mana...tu pun ingat sebahagian jer...masa tu masih lone ranjer dan suka mengarang sambil jiwang layan blues
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Post time 14-5-2008 11:22 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by indah1285 at 14-5-2008 09:22 AM
Aku mencintai orang-orang soleh meskipun aku belum termasuk golongan mereka. Aku tetap berharap semoga aku mendapat syafaat. Aku membenci orang-orang derhaka meskipun sebenarnya, mungkin, akupun  ...


kita pn suka baca nehhh....
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Post time 14-5-2008 11:23 AM | Show all posts

Reply #1204 seroja23's post

Kita juga.........
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 Author| Post time 14-5-2008 12:16 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by matlampir at 14-5-2008 10:56 AM
takde rindu pun...




actually puisi tu panjang ...tapi abg mat tak dapat ingat semua apa yg ditulis dulu...dah berpindah randah..lupa pula catatan tu letak kat mana...t ...


yelah tak rinduuu....


ooo... rupanya jiwang dulu2.....
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 Author| Post time 14-5-2008 12:18 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by vizard at 14-5-2008 11:23 AM
Kita juga.........


puisi roti.......


~ sambung.....
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Post time 14-5-2008 01:34 PM | Show all posts

Reply #1207 indah1285's post

Erk.........masih igt lg tuh puisi roti basi Viz
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 Author| Post time 14-5-2008 01:52 PM | Show all posts

Reply #1208 vizard's post

sambung ar...
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Post time 14-5-2008 02:01 PM | Show all posts

Reply #1209 indah1285's post

Ilmu roti basi viz dah hilang la
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 Author| Post time 14-5-2008 02:03 PM | Show all posts

Reply #1210 vizard's post

xyah wat roti basi aarr....
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Post time 14-5-2008 02:06 PM | Show all posts

Reply #1211 indah1285's post

Mn leh.......tuh dah jd trademark viz
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Post time 14-5-2008 02:23 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by indah1285 at 14-5-2008 12:16 PM


yelah tak rinduuu....


ooo... rupanya jiwang dulu2.....



mamat munger abg mat nehhh,,,,nah munger..
:flower:1 untuk hr ni...
:flower:1 untuk esok....
:flower:1 untuk masa depan.....



:bg::bg:
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Post time 18-5-2008 01:12 AM | Show all posts
Tiada Janji

rindu...
sungguh aku rindu..

sebak yang terasa direlung jiwa ini
tak akan bisa terucap dek kata-kata

ku tahan sungguh-sungguh
agar air jernih ini tidak jatuh menitis

ku ketap bibir...
pejamkan mata...
ingin usir bayangmu..
yang selalu buat jiwa gelora..
namun di hujung tubir mata
air hangat itu tetap mengalir....perlahan....

inginku carimu..
namun dimana

inginku kejarmu..
namun langkahku kaku

inginku dakapmu erat..
namun itu hanya khayalan

yang pasti
kau tak pernah ucap janji
khilafku kerana menurut kata hati
terbuai dengan kenangan indah yang terpatri
memori yang kuabadikan di dalam diari hidup ini


    ~ cinta.ungu ~
1.12 a.m -18/05/08




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Post time 18-5-2008 01:19 AM | Show all posts

Reply #1214 cinta_ungu's post

nice poem

mcm story sendiri...
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Post time 18-5-2008 02:56 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by don_quixote at 18-5-2008 01:19 AM
nice poem

mcm story sendiri...



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Post time 18-5-2008 12:41 PM | Show all posts

Reply #1216 cinta_ungu's post

namun di hujung tubir mata

i'd prefer - "namun di penjuru mata"

lebih direct n dramatic...
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Post time 23-5-2008 09:28 AM | Show all posts
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 Author| Post time 25-5-2008 08:47 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by vizard at 14-5-2008 02:06 PM
Mn leh.......tuh dah jd trademark viz


buat puisi roti kering lak viz..
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 Author| Post time 25-5-2008 08:48 AM | Show all posts

Reply #1218 irmazirah's post

irma tempek gamba pe ek
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