MAU TAPI MALU : Mr. B kembali lagi dgn L.O.V.E uolss!

seroja · Post time 28-11-2008 03:16 AM

uit yeke? klu camtuh kermit lagi kiut la. sbb dia men gitar

alyana · Post time 28-11-2008 03:21 AM

Originally posted by seroja at 28-11-2008 03:16 AM
uit yeke? klu camtuh kermit lagi kiut la. sbb dia men gitar

larikkkkkkkk

seroja · Post time 28-11-2008 07:18 AM

manew maw larikkkkkkkkk?

seroja · Post time 9-12-2008 09:57 PM

taraaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

persembahan seterusnya ... lagu ciptaaan sendiri oleh dari Mr. E!!!!

semoga terhibur katenye ..... sile dengar n komen klu sudi

http://www.box.net/shared/rytzt6la4f

alyana · Post time 9-12-2008 10:51 PM

to Mr E,

vocal wise, u macam Mawi, u mainkan vowel modification a lot....tak salah,
bolehlah, keep posting your song.

lagu wise, u macam abang boboo, ting ting ting ting ting gittew

. ai honestly tak berapa gemar, sebab very cliche dan tak fresh. but this is only my opionion yang tak berapa arif

[ Last edited by alyana at 9-12-2008 10:54 PM ]

seroja · Post time 9-12-2008 11:22 PM

mmg tros connect to abg kc bile part tingtong kelentong tuh

neway ni lagu dr pemain bola utk peminat nye ek?

alyana · Post time 9-12-2008 11:26 PM

Originally posted by seroja at 9-12-2008 11:22 PM
mmg tros connect to abg kc bile part tingtong kelentong tuh

neway ni lagu dr pemain bola utk peminat nye ek?

, qannn , obvious sangat2

pemain bola yewr? wahhh pemain bola yang suci

,

mana oja jumpa pacit tew, haruslah sejuk jiwa raga dan nurani oja

iH82udEAth · Post time 9-12-2008 11:28 PM

Originally posted by alyana at 28-11-2008 02:05 AM

When I am down and, oh my soul, so weary; // I strongly believe you salah masuk  all this part..  "oh my soul" , you lost fluidity and flow, making it musically disconnected and lost it soul. death emotion . try not to make it too staccato,you don’t want to sound like a robot.

When troubles come and my heart burdened be; // "burdened be" sounded bad, "when" is mumbling. vibrato not good. death emotion
Then, I am still and wait here in the silence, // "the silence" was a bit muffle. death emotion." the" sounded "der". "then" is  good.
Until you come and sit awhile with me. // "until" sounded bad. "sit awhile" quite ok. "me" urghhhh

You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains; // sounded bad, so stressfull, and forceful, lost flow. breathing problem?  learn how to pronounce "mountain" from sham

yana rindu kat death ke??????

seroja · Post time 9-12-2008 11:48 PM

errr pemain simpanan katenye..

mee_maggie · Post time 10-12-2008 09:26 AM

cam mawi kan

seroja · Post time 4-1-2009 04:41 PM

http://www.box.net/shared/kinry9q355

SILA DENGAR N KOMENTO!

houdini · Post time 4-1-2009 04:49 PM

Bunyi gaung kuat, mesti JDF suka

the_builder · Post time 4-1-2009 04:54 PM

wah...not bad...good try...leh improve lagi...wah aku komentar tu

seroja · Post time 4-1-2009 05:06 PM

owh tengs... sudi2 la komen Mr A ======> Mr G plak.

alyana · Post time 4-1-2009 05:24 PM

"forumer H

since u do it, LIVE so i'll be linearlah citit

,

entertaining but I won't go into detail,

your singing and even sounded like Mawi!

is that what u want? "Mawi Clone" ?

, it was like exactly mcm intan sarafina sounded like DCT. u can impress a lot of your frens but i dun think if u go to state or national level, they can accept. " - alyana

"my suggestion, dun sing any song that Mawi has rendered. or any Mawi song.

STRCITLY PROHIBITED " alyana

"oja inikah katanya pemain bola yang comey iittew? " - alyana